Pokédex Entries Revision (6,918 views)

[Tao]

Hello guys!

Maybe most of you have seen that Zerobreaker and I are working on the Wiki at the moment, revising most of the Pokemon entries.
I saw that most of the Pokédex entries for the Fakemon are really short and bad, always saying the same things etc.

So, english isn't my first language and zero and I have really much things to do with the rest, I'm hoping that some guys from the board could help us with new entries, or rewriting the existing ones.

Are there some guys who want to help with this?

Greetz Tao

[waterking]

Sure

[Myo]

As I already wrote to you on the wikia, I'm offering my help for some Pokémon entries as well.

[technofied]

I could help with some if you'd like?

[Tao]

Great, just look at the Wiki, their are many Fakemon without an entry (from Sasyetti to the end)
Just be sure not using more then 150 characters and make them in perfect english ;-)

Be creative and make them interesting ;-)

Thanks!

PS: You can easily post them here, if you don't know how to add them to the wiki.

[waterking]

Huskold are very hyper Pokémon. When they get separated from there mother they howl so loud that it can be heard from miles away.

[waterking]

Cryscoon's body is hard as steel, it hangs off snowcapped trees waiting to evolve, trainers mistake it as a light bulb at night because of its glass like appearance.

[waterking]

Snowfaye are popular with girl trainers because of the cuteness, They often get mistaken as Pokedolls.

[Myo]

Mar 2, 2016 23:24:15 GMT 12 Tao said:

Great, just look at the Wiki, their are many Fakemon without an entry (from Sasyetti to the end)
Just be sure not using more then 150 characters and make them in perfect english ;-)

I have a small question: is the character limit with or without spaces? ^^

[Tao]

Mar 9, 2016 2:08:24 GMT 12 Myo said:

Mar 2, 2016 23:24:15 GMT 12 Tao said:

Great, just look at the Wiki, their are many Fakemon without an entry (from Sasyetti to the end)
Just be sure not using more then 150 characters and make them in perfect english ;-)

I have a small question: is the character limit with or without spaces? ^^

With spaces. But it's not 150, it's 160, sorry. I would prefer entries with at least 120 characters.
Thanks :-)

[Tao]

Nobody with ideas...?

[waterking]

Mar 29, 2016 20:46:35 GMT 12 Tao said:

Nobody with ideas...?

I left a few on this form and no one correct them I will work on some entries when I get home tomorrow

[Ember the Flearoe]

From Sasyetti onwards, correct? I might be able to think of a few

[Verdant Meganium]

Moofork are frequently taunted by others for their bright red nose. Because of this, they are shy and it is difficult to gain their trust.
Molice has a snout as hard as diamond and thus are able to drill through even the thickest ice with ease.
For Huskold, I like waterking’s entry. If I had to give my own, it would be the following: Huskold are playful Pokémon. They prefer to stick with the pack as much as possible and when separated howl loudly.
Wolfreeze are very protective of their families and will give their life to protect their pups. Their bite has been known to frequently freeze even Fire-type Pokémon.
Polarpow are feared by travellers and hikers because of their territorial nature and fighting prowess. They often duel each other as a test of strength.
Many people are sceptical of whether or not Snowby exists. This Pokémon enjoys watching people bicker over their beliefs about its existence.
Snoroara are mentioned in myths and legends, but most modern people do not believe they exist. A few people have dedicated their lives to proving it exists.
Snowl enjoys playing in thick snow. If they see fire, they will immediately rush to their mother.
Legend has it that the sight of a Hootic flying to the east heralds the coming of a snowstorm. This myth is yet to be proven, however.
Rockold are known to do the bidding of the Arctidon they serve, and rarely question orders, no matter how dangerous.
Arctidon clash over who controls the summit on which they live. The victor rules the mountain as royalty until challenged.
Avalama are generally friendly and good-natured Pokémon, but if they dislike you, they are likely to spit icy cold saliva at you.
The snow on Himalama’s body is said to never melt, no matter the temperature. Some reports document Himalama undergoing long journeys across mountain ranges.
After hatching, Pinglett keep part of its egg on its body. This shell freezes and is used as armour.
The blades on Pingade’s wings are as tough as steel. These Pokémon can cut rocks in half with a single swing.
Noseal have a very acute sense of smell and identify each other by smell rather than sight. Each one has a unique natural smell.
Isealcle spend most of their day on ice or snowy ground and most of their night in the water. Researchers are not able to deduce the reason for this behaviour.
Sealberg have been sighted creating entire icebergs to live on. Some even hollow out the iceberg and live inside.
Thought to be one of the first Pokémon in existence, Mamon are shy around strangers, but very friendly towards those it trusts.
Mamodon and Baablizz are frequently seen roaming together. Their wool is almost identical, with only minute differences.
Melotweet is able to manipulate its foes with its song, even causing them to have illusions. It uses this technique as defense from predators.
Many consider the Tweetamy’s song to be the most beautiful sound in the world. There is a folktale that states Tweetamy were taught to sing by Meloetta.
Volteel are avoided by other Water-types due to their tendency to randomly send jolts of electricity through the surrounding water.
Lazor find it very difficult to control their attacks and are thus frequently tutored by Lazap for this reason. Sometimes the Lazor surpasses its tutor.
Lazap are able to send high-energy beams at its opponent from far distances. Their foes rarely get close enough to attack them.
Lazortron was once thought to have been artificially created, but records dating as far back as 2,500 years ago mention this Pokémon in great detail.
Lengthened Tripie’s entry: Tripie can use the suction cups on its three feet to pick objects up and transfer them. Because of this, they are popular amongst thieves.
Triwire are able to use magnetism to bring objects towards them. Burglars often use them to find and steal metal objects.
Triber are more difficult to control than Triwire, and thus are prone to attacking the thieves that like to use them as tools.
The disc and glass sphere around Youeffo are actually part of its body. They are said to come from outer space.
Many Galacdisk were kept hidden for many years and used for inhumane experiments. Due to this, most are distrustful of humans.
Ufotrix have been reported to abduct evil people and rescue good people from harm. How they differentiate between the two is unknown.

[Verdant Meganium]

Regiearth is able to accelerate the growth of any plant and make even barren soil fertile. Some legends speak of Regiearth turning entire deserts into woodland.
Regicore is said to have formed in the centre of the inner core and is the oldest of the Regi Legendaries. It can form temperatures equal to that of the sun.
According to legend, Regisea can alter the ocean floor at will and change currents whenever it wishes.
Regiwind has the ability to create gales instantaneously. It punishes those who have done evil with vehement hurricanes.
Rikoto mythology claims Regivolt descended to the surface

[Verdant Meganium]

My apologies, I accidentally left out the rest of Regivolt's entry. It should be:
Rikoto mythology claims Regivolt descended to the surface on the first ever lightning bolt. Even just touching Regivolt can release an incapacitating shock.

[Verdant Meganium]

For Frillic, Surgeon and Rairapid, their species name can be Bolt Dragon. For Fayely, Fayegon and Fayedra, their species name can be Fairy Dragon (Fayely’s already is)
Valure like to entice other Pokémon to play with them. They are usually successful to their cheerfulness and charm.
Blazgo are very courageous Pokémon. They frequently search for opponents larger than them to test their skills on.
Infergon are easily agitated. When angry, they go on a rampage, burning everything in their wake.
Lavadra are mostly found living inside volcanoes. Unlike Infergon, Lavadra are peaceful Pokémon who prefer to solve disputes without rage.
Frillic are able to control their electricity much better than most other Electric-types of its size. It uses this to its advantage when challenging others.
Surgeon release powerful bolts of electricity that disrupt nearby electronics. There have been cases of entire cities losing power because of Surgeon.
Rairapid: This Pokémon draws power from thunderstorms and is able to change the direction of lightning bolts to its desired target.
Despite their cute appearance, Fayely can be vicious Pokémon. They are cunning and using their charm to make others do their bidding.
Fayegon manipulates others to carry out its wishes. Once done, it is violent towards those it manipulated previously.
Fayedra are often associated with users of magic. Many report being mesmerized by this Pokémon, as if they were under a spell.

I really had a lot of fun writing these. Let me know what you think and feel free to use any or all of them Or even if you would like me to rewrite existing entries. Have a lovely day all, and God bless

[waterking]

I would like to do dex entries for the two normal Pokemon #331/# 332 pleases I promise they will sound good and very good job on the entires they were really good I would like to help out with the ones you did not do or have to thought of entries for

[Tao]

Mar 30, 2016 14:07:29 GMT 12 waterking said:

I would like to do dex entries for the two normal Pokemon #331/# 332 pleases I promise they will sound good and very good job on the entires they were really good I would like to help out with the ones you did not do or have to thought of entries for

It's still not decided which Pokemon will be in this place, it's also not sure which types they will have.

Mar 30, 2016 11:32:48 GMT 12 Verdant Meganium said:

My apologies, I accidentally left out the rest of Regivolt's entry. It should be:
Rikoto mythology claims Regivolt descended to the surface on the first ever lightning bolt. Even just touching Regivolt can release an incapacitating shock.

@

Thanks for your entry ideas, we think about using some of them ;-)

[xArcKnightx]

Is there a List of the pokemon whose dex entries are needed? Or just the pokemon after a certain number in the dex? or are you revising all the dex entires? (and last question, is there a character limit?)